Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

- Missed Train -

 

 

 

She missed ascension train,
    
Soul drank spite
           
harbored revenge;
                  
hungover with wrath
                          
from previous misdeeds.

Mental tracks twisted,
      
past and present
              after
Karma's tsunami trampled.
















Author notes

Prompt:
Drowning in Yesterdays

Twenty five words...

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 9, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Yikes...this was Golden! Ok...I see it was Solden...ha, but it was wonderful, especially from the prompt girl! Excellent work my pleasure as always ~Tia


  • penman gold member
    July 9, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    excellent

    Oh my what a powerful poem on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest sweetness.


  • Cupcrazy
    July 9, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Oh excellent take on the prompt, loved the imagery you carved in this one. great work, Hugs, Bunny

  • Cupcrazy
    July 9, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Your Prompt is : "Drowning in Yesterdays"