- Missed Train -

She missed ascension train,
     Soul drank spite
            harbored revenge;
                   hungover with wrath
                           from previous misdeeds.

Mental tracks twisted,
       past and present
              after Karma's tsunami trampled.

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Prompt:
Drowning in Yesterdays

Twenty five words...

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A contest entry

Quickie, 20 minutes, 10 entries, 25 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy. 450 points, ended July 9, 2007, 8 entries
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soulfultia
July 9, 2007

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Yikes...this was Golden! Ok...I see it was Solden...ha, but it was wonderful, especially from the prompt girl! Excellent work my pleasure as always ~Tia
penman
July 9, 2007
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excellent
Oh my what a powerful poem on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest sweetness.
Cupcrazy
July 9, 2007
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Oh excellent take on the prompt, loved the imagery you carved in this one. great work, Hugs, Bunny
Cupcrazy
July 9, 2007
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Your Prompt is : "Drowning in Yesterdays"