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Love You Truly(Rondelet)

Love you truly
Love everything you say and do
Love you truly
Never will I be unruly
Forever I will be with you
As long as oceans,skies are blue
Love you truly.

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The world is a wonderful place.
Written August 23rd, 2003

A contest entry

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 7, 2008

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    This poem will for sure be considered for an award in my contest. You captured what I am feeling and my relationship well.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    Lovely and heartfelt!
    Well done and good luck
    to you with it here!
    Congratulations to you
    on your silver trophy!




    Jeremy0826


  • darkstinger
    August 28, 2005
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    This was a sweet poem. Thanks for entering my contest. Good Luck.

    ERay

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 28, 2005
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    This is so sweet and lovely. It is short, but says a lot with its words. I can tell it comes from your loving heart. Great work on this very feeling piece.


  • SexyAngel0418
    January 23, 2005
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    Awww... This is a really sweet poem... I like this poem a lot... It is really cute and the background choice makes it even cuter.


  • Dancing-Incessantly
    January 21, 2005
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    Very cute, and fits well with the contest. I like it a lot, your very talented.
    Goodluck in my contest.
    Choc


  • PurpleSky
    August 15, 2004
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    I have read this and I thank you for entering. If all rules have been followed I will be commenting after the contest has closed. So just in general I am asking everyone to just take a quick look again and make sure the rules are followed. good luck


  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 10, 2004
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    Awwwww.....this makes me feel all marshmallowy inside. It's so short but it's also so sweet. Me likes it! Good luck in the contest.


  • Pierre Richards
    August 8, 2004
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    well spoken

    Sweet write here! Nicely done in this form.


  • PurpleSky
    August 8, 2004
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    thank you for entering will coment when the contest closes


  • Neon Highway
    August 2, 2004
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    Good luck in my contest. I didn't feel this flowed enough but it was still ever so sweet


  • melissa -murder-
    April 20, 2004
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    great poem! good luck!

  • bombay
    April 12, 2004
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    cute...it makes ya think about first love, crushes ( etc)
    * has never had a sugnificant other*
    bombay


  • nats21
    April 12, 2004
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    short sweet and cute. good luck in the contest

    natazzle21


  • Daises for her
    March 29, 2004
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    Beautiful, short enough for a hallmark card. I liked it a lot, good luck in the contest!

  • Stephibaby06
    August 24, 2003
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    aww...this was so sweet. Short and sweet. I love them that way ^_^. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It flowed nice and it was easy to read. Great Write. Thanks so much for sharing. God Bless You!! =D

    ~steph~

  • PoetryGirl26
    August 23, 2003
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    awww very short and sweet...cute!

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