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I Still Miss You

I told myself
That I wouldn’t miss you

Those hurtful things you said
Killed me

I miss the way
You told me

How much
You loved me

I miss the sound
Of your voice

And the way
You made my problems fade away

Was it ever real?
Or an illusion all along

In the end
You said you never cared

You said you didn’t ever
Want to remember the memories we shared

But I still
Miss you

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  • californiagirl
    September 19, 2007
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    This is very tragic. A good write. Thank you for your entry!


  • vampire.lust.death
    August 5, 2007
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    i love it its sweet and trageic , you cool i love mcr lol and ur a good poeit


  • DeamonSister
    July 11, 2007
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    WOW!!!! This is well done!!! sad very sad but very well writen!! I LOVE IT!!!!

    ~DS


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    feelings for someone that are strong and not returned are heartbreaking. i finally got around to reading some of your work! beautifully written. i can feel the pain. if this is personal...be strong and realize they are the one at lost! NOT YOU!