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My Invisible Bondage

I thought I knew
the real you
but, I guess I was wrong
you acted so differently with your friends
and left me in the dark
what took so long
for my eyes to open
Is one thing
I still haven't understood
I'm afraid I'll be drawn to you again
like bugs to a light
sweat to a knat
I know I will
you're an obssesion
I haven't been able to crack

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  • tjdougan
    July 11, 2007

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    Sincere...

    Oh! This piece really is touching and very sincere. Most people won't admit they still are attracted to the one they love who hurts them over and over again. Your admission of still being obsessed is very courageous. I understand the fact that we don't have controll over our hearts. I hope you don't continue feeling hurt and that the one you love would treat you right. Good work.


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    SO HEART-FELT!!!

    Oh how I remember when I could not let go even though the person was bringing me down so low. There does come a time when one finds the strength to move on though.