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Dark Angel



I live, breath, and survive
Just to feel the meaning of loneliness
My heart only beats –
For what we all call, darkness

Raised to see the other side of life
For me to understand the definition of pain
I closed my mind for child like fantasies
For I’ve seen in every face of life there’s crimson stain

My perception in life is far out different
I embrace life but I embrace death as well
My soul rejects the face of fear
In my heart where darkness dwell

My point of view is scary
I know… but I’m only sharing you,
what’s in my name…
And I know people want to know it too

I’m like an open book
I feel no shame
In sharing you “why?”
I chose the name of an Angel with a stain

Dark Angel

Y.A.D@
7/9/07


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  • Beating gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    "I embrace life but I embrace death as well
    My soul rejects the face of fear"
    I love those lines. I really like how honest this is, and I like how you say your name is angel with a stain. So cool and original.
    Very dark and so well written! Congratulations on the gold and the 2000 points! That's just crazy! hehe


  • RedSnow
    July 17, 2007

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    Good Luck!!!

    You sound like a very interesting person with a very interesting name. But your thoughts are dark and scary. I don't fear death because I know where I'm going, But I'm not ready to go just yet. Good read.


  • dustookie2
    July 12, 2007
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    You pen from the heart of who you are you reach down and touch people for in all life there is but one sure factor and that is death. We should not fear it for it will come we just need to go out and live life the best we can and get from life what it has to offer.


  • Dragons Lady
    July 9, 2007

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    A beautiful write. It flows so smooth. I love the way it shows an acceptance of all the aspects of life and beyond, the dark and the light and the gray in between. Pretty much the same reason I chose my name. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.


  • Centri
    July 9, 2007

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    beautiful! Accepting of every aspect of life. Love, Life, Death, and a venture to the next life. Exquisitely written. Hats off to you again m'lady

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