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The Halo of Life

The halo of life,
shadowing every move,
repairing every wrongdoing,
lingering over us...
whispering sweetly.

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  • Namita
    July 10, 2007

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    Wow, this is so simply brilliant. I must say, you're extremely talented for your age. Great job and congrats on the HM.

    Luv,
    Candy


  • Matt Holck
    July 9, 2007
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    like a Roomba


  • Laura
    July 9, 2007
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    this is a rather beautiful poem very well done to ya xxx


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    sweet and does show the world the halo of an unseen angel