Nuetral:
Everyday I deside things
Everyday I say things
Everyday I do things
Angel:
Everyday you make some bad descisions(but mostly good)
Everyday you say things you wish you didn't
Everyday you don't do things you wish you did
Devil:
Everyday you flip-flop on good or bad
Everyday you're not enough of a smart-ass
Everyday you miss opportunities
Nuetral:
Friend, someone whom you hang out with
Other than when you must
Girlfriend, a friend whom you want romance with
Angel:
You have friends, they're just souly online
Girlfriend, hmmm... I got nothing
Devil:
You have no friends, you're a loser
You have no girlfriend
Face it, your social skill suck
Neutral:
Hypothesis, younger girls like older guys
Test, go for younger girls
Rebuttal...
Angel:
You really want to increase amount of rejection?
You'll be 18 in less than a week
Younger girls are to be considered "jailbait"
Devil:
Just go for it
Everyone knows you're depressed
If you don't find a friend or girlfriend
You will commit
And we both know
That you don't want
Them to say at your funeral
"He worked hard
Too bad he didn't have anyone to share downtime with
Too bad he didn't know how to have fun
He died from loneliness..."
Angel and Devil:
He's right you know
We're just your conscience
But we know
Living how you are
You will commit to something
The worst thing...
Suicide
Author notes
ment to be read by 3 people
one for angel
one for devil
one for neutral
option C
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Very unique, however I asked you to include which option you chose.
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fixed
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Thanks for entering!!!!
This was quite an interesting read. I liked how it all came together. Good luck in the contest ^_^ @>}- -
interesting idea, i like the way the perspectives came together at the end. and i thought the debate between the perspectives was great!
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good.very interesting.keep up the good work.
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rawr you know i love this
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Wow
just wow i loved how you wrote this
keep writing
~Ashley~<3
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what made you write this?
won't you answer my questions?
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