to fly
a chance at life
to soar toward the sky
as though on a heavenly breeze
FREEDOM
no longer trapped in hard cocoon
wings open in warm sun
body breathing
flying
Author notes
Butterfly Cinquain
Anonymous, please.
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A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A lovely butterfly cinquain, and I love the theme of freedom that runs throughout every line. A gorgeous graphic too. Thank you so much for this beautiful entry.
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Pretty cinquain.
Good luck in the contest.
qt
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!
As a little boy I would always go outside and watch the cocoons wishing they would open up as I always guessed what kind of butterfly would come out.
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A Butterfly
So beautiful & safely away to grace God's earth and sky. I do remember when
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