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Kiarna's Trip

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Kiarna's off to hospital
to the children's ward
with lots of toys and nurses
you're bound to not get bored.

Your Bratz dolls will go with you
singing up a storm
songs to rock your socks off
making you feel warm

I know you have that skin tag
that will come off real quick
then back to all the friends you'll make
and ice creams you can lick.

Your room will be bright and cheery
you'll have those swinging Bratz,
those Care Bears may get jealous
I know them, that's a fact!

And best of all your Mumma
will be right by your side
maybe with some MacDonalds
with nuggets and french fries

Just think of all those presents
you'll get when you get home
there'll be visitors galore as well
so that you're mind won't roam.

So I hope this makes you cheerful
and takes away some doubts
you'll be there and back before you know it
shouting and playing about



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  • The Poetic Angel
    July 11, 2007
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    congrats on your shiny mum ..gives it a extra lil shine xxx cheeky xxx

  • PoetryPuppy
    July 11, 2007
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    I love this, thank you, you know all my favorite things, love Kiarna xxxxx


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 9, 2007

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    awwwwwwww kiarna will love this she loves her bratz dolls ... good luck in th contest xxx cheeky xxx


  • Namita
    July 9, 2007

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    Wowww.... This is a very imaginative and conveying poem. I'm sure Kiarna's gonna feel great after she reads this. Wish best for her from me!!

    Luv,
    Candy


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    awww a wonderful poem enough to calm any childs mind about any worries they may have about hospital.
    a fun imaginative write that keeps you smiling and captivated throughout.
    well done and good luck

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