Life is an ancient secret
to those who're so blind that
they just cannot see...
Vivienne Harding
09 July 2007
A contest entry
- 15 words 10 entries 10 minutes{2nd} by Choco Monkey.
300 points, ended August 2, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Makes me think... can not see? will not see? or not permitted to see? I'm thinking the latter though that's one of those known unknowns that we'll just have to figure out after the fact. Great thoughts.

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Wonderful take and so true good luck in the contest
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nice n good luck



