You think I'm afraid,
that I'm very scared.
You imagine it in my eyes,
but I've done what none dared.
Sorry, this will hurt
but, yes, I do lie.
Its in my eyes too,
don't believe the tears I cry.
I'm rough and rude,
a real heart-breaker.
so keep away friends
I'm an excellent faker.
One day I will learn
that history repeats.
I won't go unpunished,
I'll repent my feats.
Yet until that distant time
I won't be a priest or a friar
but a heart-breaking fool,
one truly honest liar.
Please tell me what you think, DO REPLY
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I like how blunt, and straight forward you are, your words are simple, yet well chosen, excellent wording!
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vERY GOOD
Yes if only they could be honest maybe the lies wouldnt hurt quite so bad good write and good point here
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"I'm an excellent faker."
Oooo, I really do like this poem - its blunt, honest, and revealing about yourself and how YOU'RE dealing with that.
=]
Thank you for your review on my poem.
~thoudreamchild
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I love it! I can't say that I can completely relate to it, but it still reaches me on a different level of understanding...good job!
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i beleive this is not true heee excellent write though your poetry is outstanding
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u don think this is true!!!!!!
wots not to beleev??
i'm an honest liar...
truly paradoxic....thats all in all ..ME...
hehe
thanx for the comment ,,,, :-)
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wow mega cool
is this about u? -
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sure its abt me ....
totally me ...
hehe
thanx for the comment...
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