You opened my eyes
You opened my life
You opened my world
You opened my mind
So very glad to see
That you accept me for me
And that I don’t have to be
Anything other than me
I love you, with all of my heart
I love you, I don’t where to start
I love you, and all that you do
I love you, If only you knew
If only you knew
I witnessed a changed in you
One that I knew, would change me too
You repaired me, and you didn’t know
I love you, but some how I’m afraid to show
You made me wonder, what this life has left for me
You opened my eyes, you allowed me to see
And I, don’t know how to say
I want you here to stay
I want you know
Though I’m too afraid to show
I love you, with all of my heart
I love you, I don’t where to start
I love you, and all that you do
I love you, If only you knew
If only you knew
I wish I could tell you tonight
I wish I could control this fight
It’s killing me inside
These feelings I can’t hide
I don’t know what to say
I don’t know which way
Make me stay, make me stay
I don’t want to let this love go away
I love you, with all of my heart
I love you, I don’t where to start
I love you, and all that you do
I love you, If only you knew
If only you knew
I, love, you.
I, love, you.
I, don’t know how to say
Love, wasn’t meant to be this way
You, I want you to know
I, love, you.
I do. I do.
Author notes
A Love song...my first in forever.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
This song is fucking awesome
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! *stands up and claps hands* ha
You should write more
Your very well at it
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Ah, to be in love! I bet this makes an awesome song. My favorite stanza is the first one.
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very long and good piece....very romantic
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These are touching lyrics. Honestly, from a poetic stand point it didn't hold my attention as it is quite simplistic and repetitious. But as lyrics put to music this would make a lovely song.
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this is really good....I could hum along to it in a real nice beat....you should write more songs....this one sounds kinda like maybe either a pop song or a really slow song...either way it'd make oone hell of a hit
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hmmm. Im trying to think of a music piece that this would go along to. At first I thought you were trying too hard, with the rhyming, it is very basic I guess, and there is much of a rhythme that can help seperate how heavey the rhyming scheme is, but yet, knowing that it is a song means it changes the whole way the words can be interpreted,depends on how it is sung and etc. I am not one for love songs, but this is a beautiful piece, simple and straight to the point.
All the best
~Hollow~
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Love is patient, Love is kind, that is love. When you find that kind of love, hold on to it with all your heart and don't let it out of your grasp.
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Awwww. Cuteeee.
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