My Emimy? No!
My One True Friend.
My Blade Is There,
Until The End.
The Pain Will Stop.
The Tears Nomore.
I'll Hide Behind,
My Bedroom Door.
I'll Never Speak.
I'll Never Cry.
Just Cut And Cut,
Until I Die...
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Well, This Is How I Felt When I Wrote. I Don't Know What Else To Say...
What Did You Think??
Please tell me what you think
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another great write;
that i also understand...
BRAVO!
x.x.x
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thanks for understaning.... glad you liked it
take care hun
xoxoxoxoxox
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Clear but powerful.. Captivating write.
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somthing still makes me think this peice is still a bit incomplete. but it helped me express myself...
take care
xoxoxo
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omg! short but farking good!
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yeah i had it left in my notebook coz i wanted to add more, but i didnt no what else and it had been there for a while, so i just posted it. i might do a part 2 tho.
thanks for your comment and applause
take care
xoxoxoxoxox
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its good i like it
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thank you
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this is really good to me it sounds like it could become a song. a song that would be one of my favorites.
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thanks alot for you comment!! i wish i could make it a song...
thanks
take care, love HB
xoxoxoxox
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Sorry that you were feeling this way 
I hope all is ok now. Take care and don't forget that I love you lots xxx
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thanks AP mum, sorry you had to read it. im fine now. and i havnt hurt myself in sooooo long
i was just thinking about it a week or so ago n started writting and only just finished. iv started a million poems and stories that iv never finished.
thats i love you too. xoxoxoxooxox
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It's okay to feel this way babe, but you won't always, and you know it too! Love you chickie, your poetry is great, love the rhyme, you always seem to express your emotions really well. Short but effective, well done!! xoxoxox
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thats sis! u no ur right. i wont feel like this all the time, i no that coz atm i dont always i have my days/nights. iv told u before, i no im getting there i can see that. but somtimes i still fall down.
im glad you liked it. thanks
love you heaps
xoxoxoxoxoxox
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