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An invitation you can`t refuse.



Please don`t be fooled by my picture,
it`s a fancy dress fat-suit I`d hired.
The idea backfired,
when I found I`d aquired,
more fat fans than I ever desired.

You think it`s a lie that I am telling?
You think what I say is untrue?
Well, get in the queue,
when this suit I undo,
You can see for yourself if it`s true.

A contest entry

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  • Griswold silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    ROFL, Fat Fans, great take on the prompt, i love the direction you went on this piece, best of luck...Scott