If it wasn't for your {{w.o.r.d.s}}
I would not be feeling this l
o
w
That simple phrase ((I love you))
Your so full of xxshitxx
I wish
[in all reality]
That you would just stop
With all of your ^l^i^e^s^
Your selfish and .u.n.j.u.s.t. ways
Remind me of why I can't
{remember} the real ♥you♥
You are the *main* reason
Why I can't stop d
r
o
w
n
i
n
g
Myself in {{blood}} at night
The reason I call upon my *friend*
To make the .p.a.i.n. go away
One hesitant cut after another
(or so it seems at the time)
Leading me to my ♥salvation♥
When {{and I am counting the time}}
Will you understand?
That I cannot *and will not*
forget you
I will {on the other hand} live .w.i.t.h.o.u.t. you
And all of the horrible things you did
To bring me d
o
w
nor will I
Let myself get too xxclosexx
Ever ...
Again
Author notes
My ex husband ... I know that I am currently married and very happy ... but no matter what ... I miss my husband at times ... and things between us will never be the same ... his lies, his abuse (mental physical emotional verbal) will always hold me to my ground ... but always will I love him
A contest entry
- It's x.Tragic.x [[DP Prewrites]] by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended August 17, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me your [[L.o.v.e]] Story.... by xxLost-in-Lovexx.
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300 points, ended February 5, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and Everything To Do With Love, Good or Bad by Blooming Poet.
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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amazing dp! loved it
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A very powerful, emotional and personal write, thank you so much for sharing. =] It was truly fantastic. ^-^ A poem in which many can relate too. Awesome piece.
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This was amazing.
I love it and most definitely feel your pain.
Great write.
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Mel -
I've never really liked this kind of poetry, but for some reason, I adore this poem. It's pretty and slightly diirty great combo
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Very powerful poem here, loves.
I really enjoyed it.
I could really feel what you were expressing and that's very valuable in writing- especially in Dirrty.Pretty.
Good job<3
-Allura
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Great poem.
Very nice work.
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this reminds me slightly of my and my ex boyfriend \=
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Mixed feelings about people is terrible, I know that as I had that a lot with my ex boyfriend. It's a kind of love/hate thing for a long time. I loved the way you expressed that you still care about him, but you will not let him drag you down again and that although you still think of him you wont get close to him ever again.
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thats sad.
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This pulls the tears right from the heart
lost love and the pain left behind I do understand my sister~ I do understand thank you so much for sharing your beautiful heart
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Finding this a little Cliche'
with the whole extra puncuation bits.
But- overall a good poem.
Thank you for entering and the best of luck to you.
Lullaby.x.
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That I cannot *and will not*
forget you
I will {on the other hand} live .w.i.t.h.o.u.t. you
And all of the horrible things you did
To bring me d
o
w
nor will I
Let myself get too xxclosexx
Ever ...
Again
babe these lines hit me so so hard i am not going to lie i am in tears , but it is k, this was such a lovely poem i love it bunches sweetie...i only wish you the best in the contest...xoxox -
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THANK YOU SO MUCH
Thank you so much for your lovely comment ... I am sorry that you are in tears ... I don't mean to strike up any bad memories in anyone ... but I am glad that you felt my emotion and my pain ... that was completely my intentions ... thank you again so much ... much love you sweetheart
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I know wxactly how you feel. For I too have been through my trying times as well. Especially being adopted. This poem brought back lots of memories. I am so sorry you had to deal with that. Just remember that God doesn't let things happen for no reason. Great write,
Beka
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Thank you so much for your comment ... that made me smile ... you are a wonderful person ... and we both share a lot in common ... if ever you need to talk ... i am here
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amazing.
This poem is so amazing. but yet so sad. i'm speechless. really.
xo
kandy -
This is wonderful and so sad. I can feel the pain in it. It's so hard to forget people we once cared about, even if they treated us like shit. Great write. You are very talented.
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M- Azing.
very well done.
Love it.
Thanks for the read doll.
<3BD9
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