on the outside looking in
there is a person that isn't too thin
i am someone that i am not
but there's only one thing i don't got
-but my heart won't go on-
any song
any time
any day
any place
my heart won't go on from you
no one can take your place
any night
every fight
any person
that can in our way
they'll will have to fuck with me
in order to put you in dismay
no one seems to know
what i understand
things i know are crazy
who can't it be accpeted like i am
too little
too late
too bad
too hate
this just hurts
this thing called fate
I didn't want this to happen
Everytime you felt near
Like i could hear his voice
whether it's here or there
Thoughts, forever and always
Love, forever more
May you ever get here
I wish this forever more
Every pray
Ever night
You know I would get you out
Just so you could be alright
Love forever and always
Only love in my blinded sight
It's long distance love. Money Issues. I love him. Is there hope?
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wow. i loved that. you are in love with someone, but you cant be with them so you dont know what to do. it can be very troubling, but you will soon find a way to be together, despite all of the blocades.
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this must be about Jeremiah
Very very very touching!!!
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Great job!
Love you!
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Great write, it kept me captured through the whole reading. Beautiful!
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what was the central ideA?
it was flowing , it had the means in it,
it was nice
but idea?
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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I guess my work isn't your cup of tea, but then everything is different then. Within the point of this, is to understand a hunger. Undying pain. To know it, to feel it, and get lost in it. Sometimes, there is no purpose, only to want to know the idea. Thanks for the comment.
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very amazing poem you got here i'd say
i loved it. thanks for the entry in my contest!
xo
kandy -
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I am glad you liked it. Good luck with judging your contest!
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Amazing write, Samantha. Ha, like all of yours aren't. I love this one. Flows like velvet. I love the part too little
too late
too bad
too hate
Don't know why but I do. Gosh, some times I want to fly to New Zealand & kick Jeremiah's butt for making you hurt like this & then drag his butt back to America.
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Love makes us do crazy things. Sometimes we are so blinded by it that we take it for granted. I think many couples are like this until one day something happens in there relationship that makes them stop to smell the roses. Not every couple gets a second chance to make up and get it better than they had it before. Thankfully, the couples that do take the effort and time to make the relationship grow and mature is normally the ones you hear about 25 to 60 years later having anniversaries. I would give anything to have a relationship like that. There were a few times in my life that I thought I had it, then my bubble burst and reality set back in. I'm not sure if I was meant to love from afar in pure fantasy or live it again in some reality, but I truly do love seeing couples in love and may you be blessed with always being that way. I will pray for you that the long distance relationship will work and that many years from now you can tell me how in love you both are like it was yesterday. Good luck with it all sweetheart!
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