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Princess

She beckons
  I answer;


She needs
  I acquiesce;

--baby girl

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    Forgot my clappies


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    Beautiful, yes we come running eh, I loved this and every mother can feel the depth of love. Hugs, Bunny


  • penman gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great short poem. Quite marvelous.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    Oh this is gorgeous You have such a beautiful heart
    Gaylene


  • Griswold
    July 9, 2007

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    Very nicely done indeed, great job with the prompt and presentation, best of luck in the contest...Scott


  • Kari gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    This is very sweet and touching. Well done on the words. Good luck in the contest

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