When did you start to drift?
When did you start to leave?
And what's the cause of this rift?
And what will it achieve?
It won't make me miss you
It won't make me care
It won't make me blue
And I won't be in despair
[lies, all of it]
Was it something I did?
Or something you said?
Just fix it already
Cause without you
My heart is dead
You're close enough to see
But too far away to touch
And for you and me
That's just too far, too much
[come back, come back]
What does she have that I don't?
What will she do that I won't?
Why do you tell her everything
But not me?
Why do I get to know nothing?
Enlighten me
Last time I checked
I was your best friend
Last time I checked
It was my heart you would mend
Last time I checked
I gave you advice
Last time I checked
She broke your heart twice
She doesn't deserve you
Your friendship or your heart
What can I do
To make your brain start?
She is nothing. She is nobody.
[oh wait. no. thats just me.]
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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damn! this made me think i knew who you were...that was creepy. how you put it into perseptive, and then gave it all the way end was very clever. good luck in this contest. it was well thought and written. i loved this.
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is this a song? it was very lyrical either way. i love the flow and i know the feeling comming across in this song. great work. Tim
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wow.
this was a great poem. i think it's horribale when peopel chose love over friendship.
and though i still don't know entirely waht this is about i kinda sorta think i have an idea.
i had a dream about you last night.
and we were skipping class.
me you gabby chris[?!] tim mia and maddie.
and we were all wearing cat masks and medevial costumes.
and we were smoking pink cigarettes.
and then oprah came.
and made us clean out that clost we were all hiding in.
and then my friend bob came and he gave me a gold star cause i moped the floor so well.
lolz.
but anyways. . . this poem was fantabulous.
you're an amazing write.
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Who?
I love this poem.
I think it perfectly describes how I'm feeling right now, and that doesn't happen often.
Great job.
I wish I understood the background.
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This is a great poem, Kate. It flowed nicely and the rhymes were good. It sucks when you really think you're better for the person you like than someone else is, but you still don't get the person you like. I hope you two at least get to be friends again, because I'm sure you would take being his friend over nothing at all, even if you can't be more than friends.
<3
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