Waves washing over
my soul –
saving grace
[ a fingertips touch ]
silent echoes are
humming soft
whispers of
solace
shattered mirror
-my masquerade
horizon sways
soft, serene, symmetrical
curves-
hypnotic-inescapable
imposing upon
my mind
exquisite imitations
with enchanting
charm
drops of you
inside my head
comfortably
caressing
visions of forever
Author notes
Just ran with the phrase...
May edit later.
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beautiful poem
amber
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"shattered mirror, my masquerade" - fabulous. Great write Bec!
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So beautiful and flows so peacefully! Excellent imagery throughout Just amazing
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this is excellent-i love it...I think it fits Ian's words perfectly,,,great alliteration here with excellent imagery throughout and the ending is fantastic-I love this piece!...bravo!
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"drops of you
inside my head
comfortably
caressing
visions of forever"
I like that last line...very cool...thank you for this entry!
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