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'A Hopeless-Romantic'

                    'A Hopeless Romantic'

Has anyone ever met a hopeless romantic'
an incurable and distinct fanatic.
I have,but I must say;
that I liked it very much.
They always like to play'
extremely with your-mind,
and they certainly know'
exactly what to say.

They are full of words so sweet'
just like being in a candy store,
a mouthful of treats.
They will hand you, the entire candy dish,
if that is your wish.
They 'love to hear tender-words themselves'
that make them feel so swell,
and they are usually 'most deserving of them.

If you happen to come across someone like that'
consider yourself, very blessed'
for they will thrill you with all of 'the-best',
and set your-heart' to the test.
They love to wine and dine you'
with only words' that put you first,
and un-mask their true inner feelings'
that set your world-a-reeling.


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  • Nam
    August 25, 2007

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    "an incurable and distinct finatic." - "finatic" would be "fanatic".

    "I have,but I must say;" - there should be a space between the comma and "but".

    I think I remember reading your work before, in this contest - the one with the varied apostrophes. Still do not get them.


  • Mansoor
    July 12, 2007

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    I really love the amazing flow and the message this poem gives.. You are a good explained and u express things amazingly. I loved the way u rhymed and this one is a fine piece and even the title is awesome, hopeless romantic...beautiful write.. I enjoyed so much reading this one.. i'd come back to read more of yours thanks for sharing this with AP members
    God bless and love,
    MAnsoor


    • Shirley Shaw
      July 13, 2007
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      Thank You Very Much,Mansoor

      I Am 'Very Happy' That You Enjoyed This Poem. Thank You Much, For The Wonderful-Comments, On My Poem..So Nice Of You!!!.'God Bless And Keep You Safe And Free From Harm'.Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo......P.S. I Am Glad U Were Able To 'Catch The Polarity' Of The Poem.Thanks Again...


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    A Hopeless Romantic... wow.... you really do write with such style and grace. Your words dance across the screen as images take life within the readers mind. I really enjoyed this poem a great deal. I wish you the best of luck in the contest but to me, it is a sure winner.

  • Lisa Haslett
    July 9, 2007

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    Excellent Poem

    This poem has good rhythm and rhyme!i liked it,very neat work,from my sister!Keep up the good writes!Love your sister!Lisa k haslett

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