It will end here now,
So close your eyes and fade away.
Nothing else will remain.
In silence say your last good bye,
And write the dot on your ending line.
Eternity awaits ahead, eternity lies behind,
So just close your eyes and fade away
Author notes
short poem
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
A contest entry
- Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 500 Entry Contest!!! ~BE EXTRA SURE TO READ RULES!!~ by kiwikrazi37.
1040 points, ended August 21, 2007, 131 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
life and death
and the dot between this is how i felt
as i read this poem
alot of clappies to you as i have ran out of points
bless you
-
Wow. This could be taken so many ways. It could be hopeful, or hopeless. It could be a gentle send-off, or a washing of hands. Either way, this is really good! Thanks so much for entering my contest!
-
short, but to the point....it has a lot of feeling to it and doesnt need anymore words to convey anything else. good job!
s -
Short but yet so full filling. I loved it. Awesome job
~Mel~
-
I like how is is so short, yet has so much feeling put into it. really good job on this piece.
-
Promise...sing
Variation on a theme on the borderline between prose and poetry but effectively conveying the author's intention -
Cool idea, well thought and very interesting. I enjoy it very much, although your lack thereof of punctuation really affects the nature of this poem. I feel this piece is very nice though, don't take my words as poison. Nice job.
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
