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His Once Tender Hands

Pale hands enclose her neck.
She screams forgiveness-
Not enough.

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To make something clear, not my own experience, but pretty damn close...
It's interesting how "love" can be portrayed.

Prompt: White.

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  • luvmypoetry
    July 9, 2007

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    powerful

    With such few words you've created this world, this scene, that unfolds before our very eyes. love the line 'She screams forgivness' - actually i love it all! Love the simplicity that expresses so much. well done and good luck


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    This is so profoundly intense and immensely attention grabbing. Great take on the prompt... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 8, 2007
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    Your prompt is ~ White