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Paranoia.

They dart around the room.
Waiting for the unexpected extraordinaire.

Filling themselves with information.
Bizarre enough to blow her mind.

Scared and alone.
She hides and cries.

Delusional experiences.
Mastermind images.


Terrified of what's within.
Herself and the place she's trapped within.

Is it her mind?
Is it walls?

Is it real?
Or is it all just an apparition of the faint hearted?

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Strange, I think.
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  • lostinsidemyhead
    August 17, 2007

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    oh my goodness! boy, how I wish I could write like you.

    the part that really got me was:

    "Terrified of what's within.
    Herself and the place she's trapped within."

    oh how I relate to that. good job!


  • celestial lie
    July 23, 2007
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    I like it