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The Savior

The road is dark and fearful ahead
but a voice is saying "Look at me instead.
No need to fear, for I am right here
guarding your soul, so precious and dear.
My child there is much you don't understand.
Just follow my voice like you're holding my hand.
In your heart you can hear the words that I say,
trust me to lead you, I'll light your way.
Now don't be afraid, just follow me,
for I am your Savior, you're safe with me."

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  • Jackle silver member
    June 8

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    So Glad I read this again!!

    This poem is so full hope. I just love it. Maybe someday when I get more points, I'll just feature it for you. I think everyone should read this.
    My Dear Poet you make mine look like a beginner.
    Love you very much, Mom


  • Jackle silver member
    October 4, 2008
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    The Savior

    You should write more often!


  • Jackle silver member
    October 4, 2008
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    You are so wise with this one

    I love the flow and soooooooo wonderful that you know
    whose in charge, love you, Mom


  • lady8
    March 18, 2008
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    Cant beleive I have not commented this,Wonderful job Mom.you should write more..