Morning comes and another day of searching
Like clocks on a mantle-piece tick and tock
Fire burns eventually turning coals into ashes
Poem with a beginning,middle,end, spoken,not heard
Life races,peace is lost in a multiplicity of hope
Day of completness,wonderings without being sure
Platitude of living,platform of little principle
Season of change,moving like snow in an synthetic prison
Thought a premium of nothingness,conversation gone
All is lost in a coagulation of never knowing
Peace a mystical presence,invalid in a poor structure
Going on we seek but difficult to find the understanding.
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful Write
Hello Gordie, How are you this evening? Your poem was truly great. An excellent write!!! Life is so many different things to different people. Trying to see where we fit in is difficult. There are so many things in life I still dont understand. Some I never will. I guess thats where I have my faith come in to help me. This is a very deeply thoughtout poem. Great write my friend. I needed my thinking cap for this one. You take care, Sandy
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This poem is written with a very deep thoughts, very mature and serious, like only people and poet experienced in life can do. Great work.
~Sonja~
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a very honest poem with so much insight, Buchan you always seem to capture the real essence of life, good and bad and the beauty of it all.....I enjoy your poems...
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ebaby
Thank you so much for your wonderful insight.I am honored with your comments.. Take Care Gordie.
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I guess we all find the puzzle of life and peace and understanding a little hard to piece together, but we keep on trying for giving up to some of us just isn't in the cards
Love, C
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excellent
I appreciate so very much .Many thanks Gordie.
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