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Permission Granted



We have had our encounters these long weeks
With many a good laugh along the way
I finally know what your sweet soul seeks
And where you'll be upon decision day

Together let us shine a vibrant light
And cast away your shadows for a time
Accept only what you believe is right
To reach the place where beauty is sublime

Then all the world will come out of the dark
Love shining on your family so warm
Your own heart will be singing like a lark
As you emerge from underneath the storm

It isn't my department, but I do
Grant you the permission to be you





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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 21, 2007

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    It isn't my department, but I do
    Grant you the permission to be you

    This is indeed a voice of the heart and describing the honest feelings..I love it my friend..and thank you so much for entering in my contest...


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    I love this tribute to one of my
    favorite people on this site...
    your poetic abilities absolutely
    shine like gold in this poem.

    I give you three bunnies...all of
    them wearing sunglasses

    Love, Lane


  • rhondasail
    July 9, 2007
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    Thank you so much Allan, I accept your permission-in the Spirit it is given...Peace, Rhonda


  • HaleyMary
    July 8, 2007

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    Lovely tribute write. I liked the third stanza the best. It makes me think of a person feeling free in life to be who they want to be after going through something hard in life. Good luck in the contest.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 8, 2007
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    This is lovely, indeed, very good flow and content. lol
    Good luck in the contest. lol

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