Oblivion....wow!
Symbolism in the nude
some would think,
"how very crude",
not I.
Views of our vulnerability
a sacrificial slaughtering of modesty
Nakedness
a peaceful prodigy
a not so ignorant ideology
to force a change in societal policy
by removing layers of the differences
we can control
The new school uniform
for our One Wolrd souls
the suit we were born in
we're meant to leave in
when we're old
Our last statement in nature's fold
let us lay her,
fertilize her land
and rot
for peace.
A contest entry
- What's So Funny About Peace, Love and Understanding? by Aphroheidi.
721 points, ended July 11, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done!
The comment below only got the title Here I am trying again...anyhow, this is an excellent work...there are so many fantastic poems in my contest that it will be difficult to judge. I especially love this line: "Nakedness
a peaceful prodigy
a not so ignorant ideology
to force a change in societal policy"
A wonderful work!!!
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Well done
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