The river is rising
banks overflowing
must be raining.
Author notes
Just thinking of all the flooding everywhere.
It just popped in my mind.
A contest entry
- Pay it forward/Haiku or Tanka by Blueskywonder.
1050 points, ended July 9, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
What a perfect short poem. Excellent write with thought and perfect imagery. Congradulations on your trophy. I would like to learn how to write with so few words, yet get the whole point across. Blessings Kelle Marie, stavykm
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This reminds me of home.
We sure do get a ton of rain in Washington State. I can relate to this.
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Intresting haiku with vivid imagery. Excellent! Well done... thankyou for taking the time to enter my competition.
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Great thought!
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I wish it would rain here just a bit, i like this
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