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Bring On The Rain (for every lover)

I need to know was it love at first sight

or was it lust that took over my mind

I fell asleep dreaming of you that night

only to wake up alone to find

maybe that you were only a mirage in my eyes

how can anyone like you be real

then I reached out my hand and to my surprise

I finally found out how heaven would feel;

the rain would fall from the sky

with each drop representing love

the sparkles would light up our eyes

as if there could never be enough

...bring on the rain for every lover!

Author notes

for number #5 and you will see my name on a few of the poems that you have not viewed/commented on

this is dedicated to Raven since she inspired it!

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    Miss Goth(Like your title-lol), thank you for liking my entry and may it be liked by others as wellTed E


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    July 8, 2007

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    this was such an inspiring poem. the dedication was very sweet too. good luck with this Ted E. ...I love the title... it's like, Bring on the Rain, for every lover. rock on and peace,love dove. ♥


  • Always Deena
    July 8, 2007

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    Why is it,that I never inspire you anymore ??? But I must say,with love and admiration this is beautiful and I know it comes froms your heart,as most of your work does.
    Have I told you have glad I am that you are back?
    I missed you,Ted
    ~~Deena

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      July 8, 2007
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      Deena, talk about a friendship...we must be kinetically connected. I just left a huge comment on your entry to the same contest and you will see that I have missed you as well. I even made a note that you are one fine mistress and you said you're not inspiring....guess you will be eating crow now(lol). Nice to see you again darlingTed E


  • Tears of Roses
    July 8, 2007

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    I never though of rain and love before but it works in perfect unison
    Roses to you

    Teresa

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      July 8, 2007
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      Teresa, thank you for such a lovely comment as I have looked at it that way only because of the Rain Girl...even though we have moved on, I will always look at it that way nowTed E

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