Today is my day.
I am finally the first in the line of life
I wave goodbye from my hearse.
Yes, fun to know you.
Great times.
I’ll miss you.
Oh- life was good.
So many things I want to say.
Bullshit
Let me be buried with the earthworms.
Let my coffin be dropped into the pit of hell.
Let the clock on my kitchen wall stop ticking.
Let those who knew me curse my name.
Go ahead and curse
I was a pain.
An ass.
A fool.
Go ahead and curse my name.
Selfish I am-I was- I will forever be.
The drivers behind the hearse smile with delight.
They smile with the burn of a passionate cigarette.
Oh they are coming.
The cars follow quickly behind.
They wouldn’t miss it for the world.
They come to spit and curse at my grave.
They come to dance upon my tomb.
Don’t worry there will be…
Music
Cake
Dancing
Laughter.
Oh they are coming.
Mom I left before your morning Vodka.
Dad I jetted faster than your new jag.
My dear brother I vanished like I have done my whole life.
My sister I am gone like your senselessness.
So dance on my grave.
You know you want too.
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Awesome grit and intensity of feeling in this poem. Much bitterness in the penultimate stanza. I like this part: The cars follow quickly behind.
They wouldn’t miss it for the world.
That puts a whole new spin on a funeral procession. Thanks for sharing your feelings. I hope things get better for you. -
I know where your coming from its a sad place to be but know there are some people that will help you out if you just let them
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"The drivers behind the hearse smile with delight.
They smile with the burn of a passionate cigarette."
Hahaha I love this.. although you were hated in life you still laugh in the faces of those who never cared about you anyway.. I really like the way you wrote this! -
THis is so sad. But I know how you feel kind of. I feel that no one will miss me sometimes. I can tell you that the poetry world will miss you becuase you right amazing poems
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wow sweetie dis waz such a great poem it is very sad though i am sorry your heart is feeling dis way i give you all my love...
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I'm sorry if this is how you really feel.
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