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And Maybe She Wishes

Maybe she wishes
She could fly on
The wings of a beautiful 
Angel

Maybe she wishes
She could just
Runaway with him
Forever

Maybe she wishes
She could get out of
This place and just
Escape

Maybe she wishes
She could get out of
All this pain and
Leave

And maybe she wishes
She could just find love
And be set free from
You

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    Whoop!

    Maybe she wishes
    She could get out of
    All this pain and
    Leave

    And maybe she wishes
    She could just find love
    And be set free from
    You

    I had that feeling once jax. It doesn't get much easier than that! oodles and toods cupcake froggie!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    Whoop!

    Maybe she wishes
    She could get out of
    All this pain and
    Leave

    And maybe she wishes
    She could just find love
    And be set free from
    You

    I had that feeling once jax. It doesn't get much easier than that! oodles and toods cupcake froggie!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Whoop!

    Maybe she wishes
    She could get out of
    All this pain and
    Leave

    And maybe she wishes
    She could just find love
    And be set free from
    You

    I had that feeling once jax. It doesn't get much easier than that! oodles and toods cupcake froggie!


  • Play Pretend.
    August 24, 2007
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    I dont think this is the right poem for my contest. it has nothing to do with the criteria i set.

  • Play Pretend.
    August 24, 2007
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    please give me your name.
    Thank You.

  • piccola silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    This made me want to cry; it's so sad, but very well written. Thank you so very much for entering this contest. I really do appreciate the entries, it makes having contests so much fun!!!


  • Namita
    July 9, 2007

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    Well-done indeed. I Like the last line a lot! Best of luck in the contest. Hope you do well!!

    Luv,
    Candy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 8, 2007
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    Well done!
    Wishing you the best in the contest

  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 8, 2007
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    Well done!
    Wishing you the best in the contest

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