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Hey, YOU!


HEY, YOU!

 

Where did you get
that picture of me?
It's been hidden a drawer.
How can you be so callous,
I can't stand it anymore.

 

Now it's seen everywhere,
I can no longer hide my face,
for you chose to put it
here in this public place.

 

Oh, my friend I thought you were,
but oh, how wrong I was,
when I saw this picture
which will cause quite a buzz!

 

Can't I beg you please,
take it down this minute,
for this contest of yours,
I seriously cannot win it.

 

I am too distraught now
to write another line
until you take it down,
that which is surely mine!

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  • leo2
    July 10, 2007

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    I was thinking... hmmm... must have been one of those 'manic moments' when one feels bulletproof and ten feet...err... in circumference. Best wishes in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • pattyann4500
      July 10, 2007
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      Aww, yes, I would say she may feel buttleproof. I'd say a bullet, and a man, could get lost in this lady.


  • IFeedFromHisKiss
    July 9, 2007
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    this is a very funny piece wow i laighed my butt off reading it awsome job


  • UnManned4Ever
    July 9, 2007

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    this is definately an interesting piece. Great write! I really like how it flows. Love ya Pattyann!!!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 8, 2007

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    This is a picture for all to see.
    Not just one, or two or three
    Anyone needing a jest
    for this dear is the best


  • My Darkness
    July 8, 2007

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    lol.. this is sooo cute and sooo funny! gosh, you could write about anything! i love it! great job and good luck to you!


  • Griswold silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    ROFLMAO, I'm sorry honey, I told you it wasn't the costume that made you look fat, it was your ass!!! Best of luck in the contest...Scott

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