We where always there for each other
We always loved one another
I was always caring for you, always worry about you
“I love you” words I would hear so often
I would repeat them daily for you
Then you would turn and hit me for something I would never do
You took pleasure in my pain
What was for you to gain?
I would apologise for my forgiveness, but yet nothing I did was wrong?
So why would you attack me? “I love you” words I began to hate to hear
“I love you” they left a bruise so near
The words did you ever feel them
Feel them like I feel pain
Can you really love someone?
Did you really hate me from day one?
Questions I will never answer you are gone from me now
But I will always be left scared by our time
Scared by three simple words “I love you”
A contest entry
- X- The dark side of love - X by The Hardest Goodbye.
340 points, ended July 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I challenge you by Ilma.
800 points, ended August 2, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Be My Valentine? Hah, I think not. by Claudia Incognito.
300 points, ended March 5, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Very Sincere--Very tough subject --Well versed and I admire your honesty---Please click link below>>>
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3861907
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...sweet, i mean its a sweet poem,shows you love easily, didnt really see a pattern but it was a lovely read.
who was writtin 4?...or should i even ask?!lol
xoxox -
Very sad and dark, I love the way it contrasts between the beginning and the end, a poem full of painful emotion and feeling, well done and best of luck
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this is so sad. i'm sorry if this really did happen to you.
but the poem was really good. 
thanks for enrtering it in my contest!
xo
kandy
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