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My feelings are Yours

The keys are love
The strings are hate
The music that I can create
I let it all out.

It's always there
I love it because
It's everywhere.
It understands.

It can be love
It can be happiness
Or anything else
It's open for you.

You can create so many things
So many emotions
It has none
So give it yours.

It feels what I feel
And knows what I know
I can't express how feel
Except on my piano.

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just a freewrite.

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  • suicideQueen
    August 11, 2007

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    i liked the random rhyme the first two stanzas had
    really opened up the poem and made it more of an interesting rhyme
    as a freewrite this is amazing
    and in a poem itself its still really good

  • explosivefrog
    July 12, 2007
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    hey babe, i like it. True poem...cool. luv ya