I'm just kicking stones, chasing loneliness; nothing much to do,
In a dusty hat and my cowboy boots - soles are worn clear through.
I'm leaving heartache, going nowhere fast, more dead than alive,
At daybreak my feet are pointing towards Desperation Drive.
When you're down and out in a hard luck place no stars shine at night;
I've been looking down such a long, long time, just can't see the light.
Haven't got a cent, haven't got a friend, no will to survive,
That's the reason why I'm heading for Desperation Drive.
I had a woman who said she loved me, caught the midnight train.
She took my money, left my broken heart in the pouring rain.
Got to leave this town, got to hitch a ride out on highway five.
If they ask me where I'm going I'll say to Desperation Drive.
I miss that woman, she’s still on my mind, breeze whispers her name.
She’s mean and evil, but she holds on to my heart just the same.
On the waterfront I check the bars and other lowdown dives.
If she’s not there I’ll find a place on Desperation Drive.
A contest entry
- X- The dark side of love - X by The Hardest Goodbye.
340 points, ended July 9, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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This was a very good piece.
i liked reading it and i liked the way it all rhymed.!
good luck in my contest and thanks for entering
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kandy

