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Merry-Go-Round(Rondelet)

Merry-Go-Round
That is what life has come to be
Merry-Go-Round
Never stopping, to nowhere bound
No joy, replete with misery
No way in sight to set me free
Merry-Go-Round

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  • CelticQueen
    September 9, 2008
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    I feel so sorry for you! I hope life gets better. Thanks for entering. cq


  • takemypainaway
    August 29, 2008
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    very good metaphor it is very clever
    best of luck
    --kat


  • boy-poet
    July 8, 2007
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    very clever thanks for entering