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Massage(Hay(na)ku)

Massage
Muscle manipulation
Magical mending maneuver

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008
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    I want a massage.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 10, 2007

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    I like this one!
    Thanks a lot for your entry here!
    I appreciate it and wish you the
    best of luck with it! Take care
    and keep up the wonderful work
    here!




    Jeremy0826


  • onesugar gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    This I like short and to the point, but still quite relaxing. Good luck.