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Dewdrop

I am a little dewdrop
Glistening in the morning sun
A dawn diamond for a short while
Long gone ere day is done

A contest entry

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  • cherche -d -ame
    July 10, 2007
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    I like the comparison of a diamond and a dewdrop....and no, I won't be so strict as to say that the rules were broken because the last line rhymed with the second one. I will take that as sheer coincidence and wish you the best in the contest,
    reenie

  • johnh94
    July 8, 2007

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    nicely done, except you broke the rules with the end-rhyme! be well and know that you are loved! John