Annexation of sensation
illustrious phantom commands.
"Surrender my sanity!"
Laughter.
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10 words, 10 minutes
Prompt: "Yesterday upon the stair I met a man who wasn't there. He wasn't there again today Oh how I wish he'd go away." - Hughes Mearns
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very good
the sanity i shall take for i have lost mine, and i am happy for your laughter less sinister then mine.
great write.
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Wow. I liked the use of quotes in this piece...it really signified, to me, that you were talking to the man who wasn't there. Brilliantly done. Good job.
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Interesting, a little confusing at times but definately a powerful point.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Very good! Love the word choice and emotion in this! Excellent take on the prompt!
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Prompt is - "Yesterday upon the stair I met a man who wasn't there. He wasn't there again today Oh how I wish he'd go away." - Hughes Mearns
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