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Relax I Will Take My Time

I will start at your lips yours on mine
Slowly I will move them down your spine
Relax I will take my time
I don't want to miss a spot

Gently I will go over your ass
and thighs until I reach your toes
Listening as you unwind with your
Whispering moans

Now as you turn onto your back
Over your legs my kiss will flow
Across your hips to your manly chest 
Lingering while I caress your neck
Then back to your lips I will go

Author notes

I hope this helps you to relax and relieves some of that tension.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 15, 2007

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    Quite a sensual and well written piece.
    Thank you for your entry in my contest
    and I wish you the best of luck with
    it here! Take care and thanks for
    sharing this!




    Jeremy0826


  • patsoldcat
    July 9, 2007

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    wow

    well the end result will be sleep for you shall exhaust me. nive sensual/erotic write.
    thanks for this beautiful wakeup call.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    Good luck.
    Tory


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 8, 2007

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    I love this sugar so so so much it is sensual. very sensual i must say. you relax your mind and your words for this paticular write I must say. I love your gift I really do to a very great write O and before I forget you have a very nine gorgeous pic you look so beautiful the pic matches the sweet sugar personality ~ Julia ~


    • onesugar gold member
      July 8, 2007
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      I read some of the other writes and wanted to do something different and this is what I came up with. As always I appreciate your comments. LOVE AND HUGS xonesugarx

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