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at the salon



hair trimmings fall
newspapers lounge nearby
clipped






Author notes

My name is Thorin-Ganush. The prompt is number seven- best prewrites.

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  • TChaplinette
    August 15, 2008

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    that was interesting.
    i loved the play on how both the hair and newspapers are clipped.



    thanks for entering
    and good luck.
    taylor.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    Thorin-Ganush Great imagery in this little snippet I wish you the best of luck in my contest thanks for entering

  • AlternateCandidate
    July 8, 2007

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    I really like this. The last line is really what makes it impressive. You are able to create an atmosphere and compare the word "clipped" to both hair and newspapers. I'm definitely impressed. Thank you for entering.


  • Namita
    July 8, 2007

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    a great poem - well written in such short lines. Very impressive for one so young.
    Keep it up and best of luck in the contest,

    Luv,
    Candy