Pastel colured pages spuing lies,
Torment festering deep inside.
Slaughterd hearts and tragic souls,
Battling beauty, tracing bones.
Purging away the imperfections,
Slicing to be rid of the disgrace.
There thirsty toungs twist the truth,
There hungry eyes beg a world who already knew.
Reality rips away as glitter masks the filth,
Shining for the world, her sanity begins to slip.
Porcalin prayers to a non-exsitant God,
Still she tells her self the mirror hasen't won.
Mia speaks beautiful disgust,
Her dim radiance manufactured this tragedy.
Everybody loves stars, everyone fell into her world,
She is the creator of distruction and of me.
Author notes
♥ Cure My Tragedy ♥
A poem about bulimia....a personal poem from my own feeling while battleing through ED
3. Write me about eating disorders
5-Everybody loves stars, everyone fell into her world,
She is the creator of distruction, she made me.
but I canged it to "and of me"...instead of "she made me."
A contest entry
- |Cure My Tragedy| ♥ by Dead Star--x.
525 points, ended July 23, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i simply love this--why because you just put into words my exact emotions, the fuckedupness i couldnt even describe- & i love it so much that i really dont know what else to say but thanx for writing it and entering because you helped me whether you'll ever know or not this has helped me realize im not the only one... when i have believed it for so long--beautiful ♥
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well I'm so glad you liked it and am so sorry you feel this way too....I know what you mean by the fucked upness of it all and keep fighting. and no...thank you for allowing me to write this.
xxx
Tash
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Wow
This is incredibly depe and very insightful as well. it is sad that you had to battle through this but am glad you have this under control. you're a very beautiful young woman Tasha and I am shocked that you battled through this. very well strongly worded poem and a very beautifully penned one at that. keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this with us
Signed, Paul
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awesome poem i loved this, it was a nice descriptive write and i loved the emotions in it
keep writing
~Ashley~<3
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