This is even more intimate than just making love
This is about the right touch to the right spot
Making you relax
And making you hot
I tell you to lie down
First taking off your top
My goal is to please you
And make your stress drop
I let the sent of burning candles
Invade your smell
I could feel the tension
And you could tell
I took my time rubbing your back
I small circles with the palm of my hand
My goal of this massage
Is to take you to a new land
I grip firmly at your tense muscles
Getting out the kinks
You took off you necklace
So your braids would not be caught in the links
I rub your neck tenderly
Pulling out the massage oil
You were so stiff
I could tell your day had taken toil
You sat up pulling my arms around you
I massaged your firm abs and arms
You began to unwind
As I was working my charm
I pressed strongly along your spine
I was quietly taking my time
You could smell the oil
With its faint scent of lime
Finally your torso was stress free
I finished your body gleaming
You turned around to thank me
Kissing me tenderly beaming
Author notes
A massage that is more sensual.
A contest entry
- MASSAGE ME! by Jeremy0826.
750 points, ended July 23, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - make LOVE to ME!!!! by Nephalaneous lover.
669 points, ended August 27, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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WOW,i've lost all words...
that was amazing...
i think i love you...kidding but i love your poem, thank you for entering this in my contest
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cuite i love this
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Sensual indeed and a great piece
you have written here. I love all
of the imagery and feeling in this.
Well done and thank you so much for
your entry in my contest. I wish you
the best of luck with it and think
you did a great job! Keep up the
wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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