Aye me, your piercing blue eyes
Stoic you that made me cry
What hurts more: That you were my friend?
Or that you broke my heart so it couldn’t mend
Aye me, your flawless skin
Tricking me into flirty sin
Thoughts of you darting through my head
And so many emotions left unsaid
Aye me, your smooth voice
Woe is me, I liked you and not by choice
Closing my eyes left you standing there
Trying to see if you truly did care
Aye me, your random jokes
On my words you made me choke
You had control over me that you never knew
If you had I wonder what you’d do
Aye me, your hateful personality
Confusing my dreams with reality
You’d flirt and vie for my attention
But then crack cruel jokes about my suspension
Aye me, Aye me, Aye you
I didn’t know what to do
But eventually I pulled through
I can safely say I’m over you
Author notes
This is poem number 2 for the contest! Wish me luck folks! [[although it's not my personal best]]
A contest entry
- [CONTEST] Round 1; Intriguing Personas, Impacted Lives by MissPennyLane.
300 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very touching. Not so sure about that they Aye me's but, other than that, enjoyable. Wish you all the best in this contest.
Bella
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lizz thids really good! ull deff. win! <3 sumi
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Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in these lines; good conclusion, sometimes takes a while to get over someone like this. Easy to read and understand.
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Thanks!
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great job lizz, of course you will win...it's great!
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Thanks guys! I feel so loved!
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g-luck....its great
i like this poem! i think its beutiful like evrey other poem uve written
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Good Luck Lizz!!!
This is really good and u have a great chance in winning!!!
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