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rippled, then stilled

slips,
  as silk,
gently through worn
fingers,
retracing steps.
lost.

A contest entry

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 8, 2007

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    Each of us takes the prompt and runs in a different direction - liked this lone - lovely thoughts. Great silver winner here.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    July 8, 2007

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    Wow ~ This is excellent. Love how you've taken the prompt one step further and created a masterpiece in so few words. So well done... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • layla.
    July 8, 2007
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    Bravo... excellent use of the prompt. I really liked your imagery.
    -esha

  • layla.
    July 8, 2007
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    prompt: water