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Did What I Had To.

I'm over your lies
Over your immature games
I'm over you sending out spies
And calling me names

I'm over your grins
Over your gentle touch
I'm over your sins
And how I loved you so much

This isn't about convincing myself
Or standing my ground
It's not about putting my feelings on a shelf
It's about the truth that I've found

That my first instincts were right
You're too immature
I've seen the light
And now I'm sure

That I made the right choice
To put us in the past
I'm glad I used my voice
When I was sure we wouldn't last

'Cause we're not on the same level
We're opposite as can be
You were a devil
And well, I was me.

Author notes

Wrote this while I was at work tonight. Had to get some feelings out cause my ex is being COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY immature about our break-up. So, comments and thoughts, Puh-lease???

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  • hopelessly-broken
    July 8, 2007

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    well just like the rest of ur poetry it was amazing! and i loved it... i am sorry to here your ex isnt acting like that. i do hope you work it all out soon. keep writting and letting your feeling sout

    take care sweetie
    love HB
    xoxoxoxoxoxo


  • hopelessly-broken
    July 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    well just like the rest of ur poetry it was amazing! and i loved it... i am sorry to here your ex isnt acting like that. i do hope you work it all out soon. keep writting and letting your feeling sout

    take care sweetie
    love HB
    xoxoxoxoxoxo


  • hopelessly-broken
    July 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    well just like the rest of ur poetry it was amazing! and i loved it... i am sorry to here your ex isnt acting like that. i do hope you work it all out soon. keep writting and letting your feeling sout

    take care sweetie
    love HB
    xoxoxoxoxoxo