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Becoming

Beset by terrors, darking night,
Boastful demons claiming sweet souls.
Back from sulphurous depths they rise
beating the sunlight with cloven wings;
Bringing destruction of the age of man.
Bastion of evil ascends,
binding fates unto lasting end.


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  • a goo

  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    wow

    that is some pretty good writing dark or not I thought it was good.

  • poetryality silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    You used your prompt letter to the tee! This is dark but beautifully crafted. Exceptional!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 7, 2007
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    Well done


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 7, 2007
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    You have 'B'
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