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Becoming

Beset by terrors, darking night,
Boastful demons claiming sweet souls.
Back from sulphurous depths they rise
beating the sunlight with cloven wings;
Bringing destruction of the age of man.
Bastion of evil ascends,
binding fates unto lasting end.


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  • Profound and wise...



    This is a perfect depicting of the five permanent members of the United Nations Security Council, if one needs to describe them.

    Deep thoughts on the Nature of our indifferent and politically apathic society. "Becoming" has paid its dues to the treasure of Poetry.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Cynthia
    July 12

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    Excellent

    I have yet to write one of pieces.
    Well done.
    Congrats on your most deserved award.

    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
    *S* Cynthia


  • individuality gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    a goo


  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 8, 2007
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    wow

    that is some pretty good writing dark or not I thought it was good.


  • poetryality silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    You used your prompt letter to the tee! This is dark but beautifully crafted. Exceptional!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Cannonsfire
    July 7, 2007
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    Well done

  • Cannonsfire
    July 7, 2007
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    You have 'B'

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