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Sickness Causes Pain

I'm sitting here,
Don't know if I can live any longer.
I want to live stronger,
Live life greater.

I'm hurting severely,
From all the sickness and lies.
From all the waiting my guardians did,
Up until now.

I really don't want the angels,
Rescuing me now.
But if I die,
This is goodbye!

To all that loved me,
I loved you all too.
But this world is cruel,
And so is sickness;
Bringing my death.

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I hurt everywhere, and I am really really sick.
My grandparents are finally realizing, I am dreadfully sick, and need professional help.

God be with you all,
And hopefully me as well.

Please...comment..it would mean a lot...

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  • Stabbin Apples
    July 9, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Omg i hope u get better! The poem is awesome! Love it!!

  • Katli
    July 8, 2007

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    Good poem...

    I now what you feel!
    I don't think anyone knows how badly I hurt.
    The way I act though They'd never be able to tell...
    Everyone can heal over time.
    But the scars are always there...

    overall the poem was good.

    Free verse is awesome because there are no restrictions...