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Writer's Blocked

I want to write,
Only I don't have enough words to say-
They just go round, round,
And round, again
Thoughts like pain
I don't know if I'm sane.
I might fade away
Like this pen
In and out
There and gone,
Again.

Where do you go when you're not here?

Thin,
My face and skin
Like I've gone
Too far within
May I return
Or continue to yearn
For who I used to be?
I can just make out
A melody,
A song just for me,
Still, the words won't come
Still,
I am undone.

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  • Donotcallmebenny
    November 5, 2007

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    you? writers block? nuh-uh. wouldn't this be like a contradiction, since you claim to be blocked yet you've written this?
    soz im new to this... i'll try to be good. but i really loved it.