Think behind when you get out front
You get out front to take a punt
To take a punt no need to rhyme
No need to rhyme all of the time
All of the time a vision comes
A vision comes don't add the sums
Don't add the sums before they're done
Before they're done there is no fun
There is no fun in forcing thought
In forcing thought it comes to naught
It comes to naught if dreams just stand
If dreams just stand so still and bland
So still and bland constrained and cold
Constrained and cold with no true soul
With no true soul the words don't come
The words don't come for everyone
For everyone who seeks the sun
Who seeks the sun to have some fun
To have some fun in written verse
In written verse you can converse
You can converse if from the heart
If from the heart you've made a start
You've made a start by spilling ink
By spilling ink your thoughts you link
Your thoughts you link within a beat
Within a beat those thoughts repeat
Those thoughts repeat into the song
Into the song that travels on
That travels on into the stars
Into the stars and to the hearts
And to the hearts of everyone
Of everyone until it's done
Author notes
Sooooo can anyone else do this???
Author notes
Adrian and I playing with words. Came out with this.
Collaboration: WarrioroftheHeart & Recluse Writer
PUNT: Aussie Slang...attempt; try eg.I'll have a punt at it
In a list
A contest entry
- Wacky Poetry Contest by Florida Sunshine.
700 points, ended November 4, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like it
dunno what much more to say....I just enjoy it (it's been a long day and i'm not thinking clearly anymore) -
Fun and pleasing. I have done this but just by repeating single words. That's called a wreath, I think.
I am not sure what your version is called but it turned out very nicely. Kept me reading.
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LOL I like this poem, but had to read it slowly as I kept tripping up over the words, but perhaps that was the point, I think the use of words is very creative. My favourite part is the last stanza
Keep it up !!!
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just like the rhythmic waves of the sea the poem is great
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Thanks
It is different but then what is poetry
if not to make the thinker think
if not to make the thinker think
Then what is poetry?
It is different
but...
Pardon me there ..I saw an opportunity and took it
Appreciate your comment verrrry much
Linda
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Wow! I felt like I was listing to the left the whole time I was reading it, or swirling around in an endless circle, or trying to move forward by always taken back... Great job with this, don't know how you did it!
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Take a helping of a Warrior...add a pinch of a Recluse...
mix with VB...stir don't shake and there you have it
Solves any dispute on who should begin or end a line too!!
bwahahahaha
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I am not a worrior
Typo in the collab bit sweetness
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This is a fun poem to read The words seem like they should be sung 
Well done Sorta has a nursery rhyme feel to it 
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Our pleasure babe. Just having a play around here with our collab effort...some chinking to be done I think! Shhhh don't tell Adrian I am playing huh! Ya can sing 'em too!!!
Cuz
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Shhh...
Don't tell me you changed a word
Don't worry I won't tell
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Just a thought...what do you think?
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